Evaluation of Others.

Emma Webster:
      Has written a wonderful read on Ambrose Bierce and has timed her project perfectly, despite a late start. Although throughout her essay she can become unsure in her judgement Emma still manages to make relevant and succinct points about Bierce's representations of the Civil War.

Thomas Wallace:
     You understand the basic principles for the essay and genuinely is interesting and any point you make is important. Your biased nature towards Parenti have lessened as your drafts have rolled off the assembly line, which has benefited your argument immensely. However your time management is not great and I can only hope your inability to construct introductions has been resolved, as they are a lynch pin for any argument.

Nicole Crichton:
     You have the best time management of anyone else doing the project and the extra benefit of having something complete for Mr Wright will help you immensely. I cannot comment directly on your essay due to my personal lack of interest for Shakespeare but so long as you have listened to sir all should be well.

Peter Moore:
     Your fascination and interest of the Second World War has and will help you complete this task. Your time management is terrible and if you had completed a draft for Mr Wright you could have been at the top of the pack. So long as you remembered the question in your essay you will do fine.

Tatiana Stoffers:
     You started off superbly at the beginning of the year with your staggering amount of research. This has put you in a prime position to write at an early stage but unfortunately you squandered quite alot of this time. Your research did however help you here as your essay has come together in a relatively quick manner and the help you have received from sir in the last 24hrs prior to hand in will save you.

Benjamin Goodwin:
     You have already had supremely helpful access to Mr Wright and this will ensure a higher quality essay. The Cuban missile crisis is the perfect area for an essay given your enthusiasm. The negatives are that you have left your essay too late to utilise sir's advice and so I am worried that his early help will not be fully used and your potential not reached.

Abigail Fisher:
     An essay of BPC is a wonderful thing to do. As a Scotsman he is already, no doubt, portrayed negatively and this essay will be very interesting. From what I can tell your time management has been great and your essay will benefit from the drafts you will have handed in.

Jesse Hyland:
     Your extensive access to sir has benefited you and your essay. From what I have seen it is well constructed and you should do you. Your lack of blogs may hinder you as it as prevented us from understanding the evolution of your essay.

That's all people for this blog. If you don't like what I said, tough. Criticise my work on your own blogs if you wish.

Paul Wray.